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The last few folds of day
are leaving on a train
to Mexico,

hitching up
red skirts
and flying south.

Watch them
salsa – rumba – tango
with night,

fling their skirts about -
Red sky delight.
Wrote this a while ago.

Not really sure how much I like this, expecially the last line.
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CrashHooligan's avatar
Whoa. I really like this poem. I usually find poems about sunsets are a bit cheesy or overdone, but this one is great. It just makes sense, the metaphor(s), and I read it and thought it was so original without being cryptic. It's one of those things where I'm like "why didn't I think of that?"