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Perhaps the leaves are jealous by ~a-random-quigle:icona-random-quigle:

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                                                             Two hairclips
                                                     clasped upon the table,
                                                          tight and metal
                                                          their embrace.
                 
                                                                 Even
                                                        the peppercorns
                                                         in the spice-mill
                                                   must feel my happiness,

                                              And perhaps the leaves outside
                                                            are jealous.
©2004-2009 ~a-random-quigle
:icona-random-quigle:

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There they were, on the table- and so I wrote about them- a while ago.

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*oddlyaromatic Jul 13, 2004, 6:54:27 AM
I'm not sure I identify with this.

Perhaps my philosophy on leaves is a bit different :).

--
I'm one of your talking wounded.

[link] - Wilt N Flowers; poet, novelist and all-round genius. Enlightened and at your service.

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:iconpachunka:
$pachunka Jul 13, 2004, 7:16:55 AM
I'm noticing- you seem to write about things, where I write about thoughts. I think. Is groovy. :)

This leaves me wondering...
:iconpachunka:
$pachunka Jul 13, 2004, 7:18:33 AM
Apparantly it's despicebly easy to hit 'relocate' instead of 'comment'. :|

Got me some stafftools to fix. I'll put this back. =P
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~a-random-quigle Jul 13, 2004, 7:34:55 AM
idiot- cute one though...
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~vivzy Jul 16, 2004, 4:39:04 AM
interesting poem
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!somedrunkblackspoon Sep 10, 2004, 8:52:39 PM
they aren't, but perhaps is a good thing.

--
love so deep, kills you in your sleep
:icona-random-quigle:
~a-random-quigle Sep 12, 2004, 8:40:49 AM
I was happy

it was cold

outside

the

leaves

were

underwatered

brown

Everyone has fantasies.
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