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I'm bothered about something,
but I don't know why,
or what for that matter-
maybe it was all the cleaning,
a year's worth of moldy things
from the back of the fridge.

Sticky, grimy and stinking things,
you'd be surprised the beasts
that lurk in the top of presses
and in the cracks
beside the dishwasher-

and though you go at them
with brush and bottle,
they've a tendency to rise again
unbidden, unbitten.

Maybe it was all the thinking,
cleaning is better than thinking-
so sleepless and at three am,
the house pristine,
I spill coffee on the carpet
just so I can do some scrubbing.

Maybe it was all the thinking,
cleaning is better than thinking,
though one is much like the other.
©2007-2009 ~a-random-quigle
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:iconminion-for-hire:
Kinda cool. You reminded me of a someone with this. Little scary.

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I have recently decided that in my case, the phrase "know thine enemy, and know thyself" is redundant. I am my own worst enemy...
:iconadreanna:
Minion-for-hire linked me to this. My little sister says it's just like me too!

I like the poem a lot. My only comment would be that "or what for the matter-" might sound better as "or what for that matter-"

I love the lines "they've a tendency to rise again;
unbidden, unbitten." It really sums it all up ;P

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~Adreanna; now in the extra-spicy brand of crazy, for a change.
:icona-random-quigle:
You spotted a typo... thank you! I can't believe it was never pointed out to me before... :shakesfish:

I'm so glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the fav! I was pleased with those few lines.

The poem was inspired a little by myself... but more by my mother and a friend of mine from secondary school...

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a-poem-a-day

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